Day 12 of #authorlifemonth : Killed Darlings

Day 12 of ‪#‎authorlifemonth‬ (killed darlings) Many scenes get rewritten and altered or scrapped for later use. This scene from SOULS 4 SUPPER was originally much different than what you see. It was going to have them discovering the spirit during their intimacy, but I felt them realizing it was there afterwards was much more haunting